Final
First draft
Improvements that had to be made:
- Make it move more, it is too still and gets boring really fast
-Edit the voice a little bit.. it sounds weird
-Maybe add some subtitles so it reaches a wider audience and follows the anime conventions
-It isnt too clear what brand this advertisment is for, make it clearer somehow?
-Make it more entertaining, add pop up images
-Add a better background instead of plain black backgrounds - its boring.
-Edit the voice a little bit.. it sounds weird
-Maybe add some subtitles so it reaches a wider audience and follows the anime conventions
-It isnt too clear what brand this advertisment is for, make it clearer somehow?
-Make it more entertaining, add pop up images
-Add a better background instead of plain black backgrounds - its boring.