final Poster
First draft
Feedback from Mr Moul:
Great social action, just reword some of the phrases such as change ''ruling socially'' to ''is prevalent'' and instead of saying ''youth'' say ''young people''. To add onto this, increase the length of holly showcasing her suicide patient picture and you will have completed your work.
Great social action, just reword some of the phrases such as change ''ruling socially'' to ''is prevalent'' and instead of saying ''youth'' say ''young people''. To add onto this, increase the length of holly showcasing her suicide patient picture and you will have completed your work.